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Scootaloo

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If you like my art - watch me. (watchers = motivation)
Scootaloo © Hasbro
Art © Me
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Well, this is a very decent drawing. I like the way you make the hair very curly, and over top. But the shading inside of the hair makes the drawing droop from it's cute and bubbly atmosphere into a realistic drawing. You might want to leave it plain.

I see this problem with most things I see. Where is the story? All she's doing is sitting on the ground with her hooves together. Is she praying? She also has a suggestive face on so erase that. It seems as if you just drew this for the LULZ or something.

You might want to change her expression, it makes the picture confusing, as do the praying position.

The shading behind Scootaloo makes it look flat, and one of your goal to fanart drawing is to make it look real, like it came out of the show (this might've not been your goal but you should at least try to at times).

The shading is a little weak and you might want to bring it out a little more.

You might want to shade the tail and try to straighten the lines a little bit.

3.5/5 (a B)

~IheartWaffies